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热蛋么 发表于:08-05-11 07:06 [只看该作者]

Student behaviour have been caused lots of severe problems in many countires. It has attend to a extremely severe degree that some measures must be taken to resolve this problem. I will take some possible examples to illustrate the causes of this problems as follows.

  On the one hand,in some developed countries,people usually link the bad behaviour of student to the internet. Whit the development of the internet,many students spend their leisure time on chatting or playing games online,which is thought to be a big waste of time. For that reason,many student can not hand in their assignment before the deadline.

 On the other hand,there are still many students in the developping countries and the poor countries are suffering hungry ,diseases,desarst,etc. students in such bad conditions always can not concentrate on their studies,because they have so many things to worry about. It’s easy to find a student who take two or more part-time jobs to earn their living in some colleges in china.

  In my opinion, some organizations that have the duty to care about students must be set up to resolve this problem. Overall ,either the students get habit of the internet or the student suffered from tough factors both lack of careness. Teachers in the organizations should have special skills in finding problems of students in time and take some methods to prevent student’s behaviour that will effect their studies. For instant, by doing that,it is accessible to see that these students will make good use of internet to promote their courses.

  In conclusion,the courses of students bad behaviour to schools are preventable. I think the education systems all over the world have the ability to resolve this problem absolutely before it getting worse.

                                           

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朱九真 发表于:08-05-11 08:39 [只看该作者]
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hand,there are still many students in the developping countries and the poor countries are suffering hungry ,diseases,desarst,etc. students in such bad conditions always can not concentrate on their studies,because
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偽嗳走兲亞 发表于:08-05-11 09:15 [只看该作者]
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顶顶

不想长大6 发表于:08-05-11 15:21 [只看该作者]
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一般啊 比六级好点
无奈的死神 发表于:08-05-11 16:57 [只看该作者]
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顶!
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彩虹鱼520 发表于:08-05-11 20:26 [只看该作者]
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雅思作文
   人不是魚,怎會了解魚的憂愁。 
   魚不是鳥,怎會了解鳥的快樂。 
   鳥不是人,怎會了解人的荒唐。 
   人不是鳥,怎會了解鳥的自由。 
   鳥不是魚,怎會了解魚的深沉。 
   魚不是人,怎會了解人的幼稚。 
  
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